Can i suggest a thing? Only my personal opinion... But, when you draw close up of eyes.... I suggest to draw some and more details like eyelashes... Just to give a touch of reality, also if a manga, some details you don't make with normal panel, you can put on these close-up... *hope you understand what i mean, lol*
Great work of Miss P.B. (sorry, i use diminutive of Pink Bubblegum, lol)!! She looks very scared, now!!!! Ohmygosh... i was thinking that she know the boy, but now looks is a totally stranger!!! Damn.. You're great to change way with characters!!!! I like the last panel... Looks very action!!!!!!
Thank you. To me it's easier drawing on paper. And ink is absolutely fun to use. I'm a bit confused with SAI tools, don't understand their behavior. And after a half of an hour of using it I say "Grrr" and switch to Photoshop. Maybe just not my thing.